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“I wish I'd seen you as a little boy, without your armor to fend off the world...I would have kept you underneath my wing...I would protect you from everything.”

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I love the tension in this macro. I feel as though the larger drop is about to consume the smaller one, or has forced it to the edge with nowhere else to go. Or perhaps, it is saving it from destruction. Based on your title and description, I'm not sure if this was the reaction you were looking for.

I love water drop photographs, but I must admit they are not very original anymore. Currently, it takes a personal touch to add a bit of originality. In your photo, I absolutely love that you have two drops placed in such a tense composition. The touch of blue in the sea of red and pink is also very appealing.

Great exposure here! However, there is a bit of banding going on in your colors. This may be due to editing and/or lighting. I think taking down the saturation a bit in some of the red areas would decrease the banding. The composition could also be improved by cropping 25% off the top. This would help eliminate the distracting white/pink shape in the top right corner, keeping the focus on the droplets. I would also suggest for the future to play around more with different compositions in general. Great job in keeping your light source out of the water droplets, that can get really distracting sometimes. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

Overall, well done! This certainly is an eye-catcher. With a few more tweaks, it may catch even more attention. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />

Cheers!